"POEM WITHIN A POEM" by Kevin Mcentire
"Best foot forward" by Kevin Mcentire
My fateher gonna visit, i am a lot like him
we share many traits like joy and temper
we are addicted speed (not the narcotics)
so we watch the racing cars go
when he visits i want my place to look real now
what should i do???........Design Remix!
how will you do it? I'll show you how!
*** "Design Remix" by Kevin Mcentire
*** Look at this carpet it looks so soiled
*** and the color is so outdated
*** I gotta call in professionals
*** to get this place created
*** paint the walls red and blue
*** recover that sofa and chair
*** this old lamp will ad some spice
*** and this plasma tv will ad some flair
*** yellow pillow pops and looks real great
*** the designer? yeah he did cool
*** a brand new carpet and end table
*** will make this placea jewel
I gotta put my best foot forward
pull this one off
so my dad won't be disgraced
that design remix really filled the bill
redesign that space!
Friday, November 16, 2007
Monday, November 12, 2007
cool news
good news
sunday was great day for me. at the family reunion i was talk to my uncle and he say if i have a car cuz he has one he needs to get rid of. well he gave me a car it is a suzuki sidekick. it has some pretty lame grafix on the side but it is so cool to get a free car. so i got it home yesterday morning right after i got paid so i went over to best buy and hooked that car up. i got the best stereo i have ever seen.
first of all it is a cd player and its got a tv with a dvd player. thats right i can watch a dvd in the car. my brother just got a dvd player last summer and now i got one.
you push a button and the screen comes out and fips up it is the coolest. not only that i hooked up on the big speekers. BIG and a amp. it is so loud that i pulled in the driveway and i woke my brother up when he was sleeping in the house and he even has a sleep dis order. he said i am too old for this stuff but then while he was telling me i should spend my money on a rent i turned up the radio and i couldnt even here him. so then i sat out there and watched BLADE on that stereo it was co loud and cool. you will have to check it out. i show it to Dade during thanksgiving - he will freak out.
MORE REBEL
Well a lot happened over the week end folks:
well, we had a family reunion out in long beach and wow it was to much fun a lot of people showed up witch brings me. there were a lot of little kids their of all ages new baby to teenage menace. well this witch brings me to my point...i have a cousin thet is about 12 years old, he is a cool hid, cool hair cut fashion clothes. his name is timothy. i havent seen him for like 5 years and i was glad to catch up with him so i decided to give him a gift since he lives in oklahoma and i never get to hang out with him. so i gave him a fiver and he seemed pretty happy even though his step dad says he has a job on some kind of farm and he makes more then me working for the government.
well, folks he took the money and i barely saw him after that. he probably thought i was lame since i am so old.
well i found out who he did hang out with and who he did think was so cool ---a 8 month old baby named Ethan. why was this baby so great? because he was a trouble maker...the mom wants him to be quiet and then he screams. he pulls stuff off the table. he pushes his toy into old aunt rhonda. ha ha ha rebel. so my 12 year old cousin thinks this kid is such a rebel. let me tell you something that is just a baby. he isnt being a rebel or trying to make you laugh - he is just being normAL.
I DO WAY MORE REBEL STUFF AGAINST THE SYSTEM THEN ETHAN THE BABY.
-who scratched his brothers new sport bike and caused 15hundred dollars worth of damage? me
-who told the english teacher to hit the road in highschool? me
-who got kick out of the politacal meet up for posting the facts on global worming? me
hay timothy you think its a rebel when a baby yells after his mom says be quiet? well i melted my moms window frame and now it leaks
i dont back away from a fight
so who is the real rebel timothy me...i know when i am going against the system - or that baby that dosnrt event talk
well, we had a family reunion out in long beach and wow it was to much fun a lot of people showed up witch brings me. there were a lot of little kids their of all ages new baby to teenage menace. well this witch brings me to my point...i have a cousin thet is about 12 years old, he is a cool hid, cool hair cut fashion clothes. his name is timothy. i havent seen him for like 5 years and i was glad to catch up with him so i decided to give him a gift since he lives in oklahoma and i never get to hang out with him. so i gave him a fiver and he seemed pretty happy even though his step dad says he has a job on some kind of farm and he makes more then me working for the government.
well, folks he took the money and i barely saw him after that. he probably thought i was lame since i am so old.
well i found out who he did hang out with and who he did think was so cool ---a 8 month old baby named Ethan. why was this baby so great? because he was a trouble maker...the mom wants him to be quiet and then he screams. he pulls stuff off the table. he pushes his toy into old aunt rhonda. ha ha ha rebel. so my 12 year old cousin thinks this kid is such a rebel. let me tell you something that is just a baby. he isnt being a rebel or trying to make you laugh - he is just being normAL.
I DO WAY MORE REBEL STUFF AGAINST THE SYSTEM THEN ETHAN THE BABY.
-who scratched his brothers new sport bike and caused 15hundred dollars worth of damage? me
-who told the english teacher to hit the road in highschool? me
-who got kick out of the politacal meet up for posting the facts on global worming? me
hay timothy you think its a rebel when a baby yells after his mom says be quiet? well i melted my moms window frame and now it leaks
i dont back away from a fight
so who is the real rebel timothy me...i know when i am going against the system - or that baby that dosnrt event talk
Wednesday, November 7, 2007
DADE MERCHANT IS RIGHT
because i lost a bet on sine language i had to post this on my blog because i lost a bet about deaf bet
happy now dade?
Now. someone asked me about my last poem
"machine in seven parts" they want to know what it means. what my thought process ewas so here we go with notes:
"machine in seven parts"
1. machine the main plot of the poem i was thinking vacume cleaner
2. warfair war like world wars and iraq
3. the path it is a difficult to travel a path
4. hope inspiration and joy people helping people
5. ducks innocent animals cought up in the system
6. toil it is difficult to work
7. rest sunday - take it easy!
happy now dade?
Now. someone asked me about my last poem
"machine in seven parts" they want to know what it means. what my thought process ewas so here we go with notes:
"machine in seven parts"
1. machine the main plot of the poem i was thinking vacume cleaner
2. warfair war like world wars and iraq
3. the path it is a difficult to travel a path
4. hope inspiration and joy people helping people
5. ducks innocent animals cought up in the system
6. toil it is difficult to work
7. rest sunday - take it easy!
Monday, November 5, 2007
the best things
the best things that could happen to me
1> publisher clearing house 100 million dollar winer
2> win the californuia state lottery
3> find a suitcase with a ton of cash in it
4> get married
5> my brother larry mcentire to get cured of his sleeping disorder
6> a family member dies and leaves me a manchen in the hollywood hills beverly hillbillies style
7> get to meet drew carey and win a car and the showcase showdown on the price is rite
8> win a ringtone contest where i get to party with a rockstar in vegas for one nite
9> win a chance to be on elimidate or the real world --- - - - it mite help my dating life and to met girls plus then i would read the girls some of my poems and they would love it and i would get my stuf f out there on TV.. not like that BBC deadend
10> win a lifetime suppluy of something i use a lot of like ointment. or payday candy bars.
11> win a all expenses paid trip to somewhere cool like japan or korea
12> win a drawing for a tv or a sailboat. i would really like my own tv right now i live with my brother and he always wants to watch nfl weekend or wwe entertainment wrestling or basketball i hate that i want to watch csi and king of the hill
13> get a job close to home so i dont have ride the bus
14> lose about 30 pounds
15> get my own place and stop sharing this duplex with my bro
16> have someone with a cool car give it to me and say well i dont drive it and as long as you take care of it
17> get my poetry published in a book and sold at waldenbooks. actually this would be number one.
i have wrote a lot of good stuff lately its like short intese poems that are heavy weight and your mind just becomes the poem for a second here is one i just finished:
"machine in seven parts by kevin mcentire"
1. machine
2. warfair
3. the path
4. hope
5. ducks
6. toil
7. rest
1> publisher clearing house 100 million dollar winer
2> win the californuia state lottery
3> find a suitcase with a ton of cash in it
4> get married
5> my brother larry mcentire to get cured of his sleeping disorder
6> a family member dies and leaves me a manchen in the hollywood hills beverly hillbillies style
7> get to meet drew carey and win a car and the showcase showdown on the price is rite
8> win a ringtone contest where i get to party with a rockstar in vegas for one nite
9> win a chance to be on elimidate or the real world --- - - - it mite help my dating life and to met girls plus then i would read the girls some of my poems and they would love it and i would get my stuf f out there on TV.. not like that BBC deadend
10> win a lifetime suppluy of something i use a lot of like ointment. or payday candy bars.
11> win a all expenses paid trip to somewhere cool like japan or korea
12> win a drawing for a tv or a sailboat. i would really like my own tv right now i live with my brother and he always wants to watch nfl weekend or wwe entertainment wrestling or basketball i hate that i want to watch csi and king of the hill
13> get a job close to home so i dont have ride the bus
14> lose about 30 pounds
15> get my own place and stop sharing this duplex with my bro
16> have someone with a cool car give it to me and say well i dont drive it and as long as you take care of it
17> get my poetry published in a book and sold at waldenbooks. actually this would be number one.
i have wrote a lot of good stuff lately its like short intese poems that are heavy weight and your mind just becomes the poem for a second here is one i just finished:
"machine in seven parts by kevin mcentire"
1. machine
2. warfair
3. the path
4. hope
5. ducks
6. toil
7. rest
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