Wednesday, November 7, 2007

DADE MERCHANT IS RIGHT

because i lost a bet on sine language i had to post this on my blog because i lost a bet about deaf bet
happy now dade?

Now. someone asked me about my last poem
"machine in seven parts" they want to know what it means. what my thought process ewas so here we go with notes:

"machine in seven parts"

1. machine the main plot of the poem i was thinking vacume cleaner

2. warfair war like world wars and iraq

3. the path it is a difficult to travel a path

4. hope inspiration and joy people helping people

5. ducks innocent animals cought up in the system

6. toil it is difficult to work

7. rest sunday - take it easy!

1 comment:

DADE said...

Your a punk - dade merchant

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